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Disappointments in Final Books

I jotted down this list last summer, after I’d read a lot of final books in trilogies/series and found that a lot of them were disappointing for the same set of reasons.  I wanted to write up the list while it was still fresh in my analytical-reader mind.  I meant to turn it into a blog post then, but a lot of crazy life stuff came first.  So, here it is now.  Feel free to add your own in the comments. I figure I can refer back to this list with my writer hat on later.

So, without further ado, things I thought made final books weak:

  • New set of main characters introduced, taking time/focus away from those we grew to love in the first two books.
  • New plot/story arcs introduced out of nowhere, then not given enough depth or resolution as the others.
  • Last minute betrayals, romances, or deaths included for “extra drama.”  These feel last minute because the betrayal/romance wasn’t set up or hinted at in previous books, and death wasn’t a possibility or a true risk before (no minor characters had died, so why should a major character die now, etc.)
  • Plot holes and other evidences of a rush job in writing, as if the author/editor were on a much tighter deadline than the previous books, less time allotted to think ramifications through properly, or they’d spent years mulling on or simmering over the first half of their story but only now discovered their ending, and so on.
  • An ending that isn’t given enough time or development to balance out everything that came before it, to feel satisfying or resolved.  (“In late, out early” misused).
  • Not enough hope (to counterbalance all the previous darkness)
  • Too epic, losing sight of the intimate stories and scale of the previous books and what made these compelling.

Anything about ending books that bothers you (as a reader)?


Of Princes and Endings

An Unsatisfying Ending.

So, a few months ago I finished playing Prince of Persia 4.  The game-play was awesome–and beautiful. The writing was quirky and fun. The voice-acting, excellent and believable. The music, gorgeous.

The ending, frankly, sucked.

Granted, a French company made the game, and the French have a penchant for bleak endings, but the ending was highly inappropriate for the story–and here’s why.  (Spoiler alert)

The game starts when a desert-wandering thief encounters a Princess running away from her father and his men.  The thief teams up with her to fight those after her–and then gets sucked into the story. It turns out there is a Dark God bent on taking over the world. He used to be trapped–but now he is working his way free from his prison. Why? Because the princess Elika died and her father called on the Dark God’s powers to bring her back to life in exchange for its freedom.

The entire game we are fighting dark monsters and racing around solving puzzles and healing the darkness-corrupted lands to weaken the Dark God’s power. The boss-battles are against the Dark God’s minions–or servants–including against Elika’s father. And then the ending battle is against the Dark God himself to trap him again.

Only the “ending” doesn’t end there. Because Elika has to die in order to trap the Dark God again, (thereby returning the world to the way it was before her father resurrected her), the thief, now in love with her, goes crazy with grief and then–in order for the game to actually end–you have to go cut down the tree-seal on the Dark God’s prison, take that power and then resurrect Elika with it, thereby UNDOING EVERYTHING that you worked so hard to do in the game.

The last dialogue is Elika asking, “Why?” and looking up with horror into the thief’s face as the Dark God’s power sweeps over the land.

(End spoilers)

As far as endings go, perhaps they did everything “right”.  The story goes full circle in the little mathematical equation:

(beginning set-up (romance-subplot (middle)))

Everything is tied up “neatly”. Resurrection to resurrection; first no romance, then romance, then betrayal and lack of love.

However! Because the ending undoes everything the player has done in the game, it leaves the player feeling like they just wasted all of their time and effort.  Resurrecting Elika was also a really stupid thing to do. The entire game we know her love of the God of Light (she is a priestess), and we know what she is fighting for and what her happy ending would be.  Her happy ending IS to save the world, even if it takes dying for it.  The thief is stupid, dense, and an idiot if he thought for even a moment that she would love him if he undid everything she fought for.  Dying is not a tragedy here–undoing everything she died for is.

A Satisfactory Ending.

Editorial tradition states that in order for an ending to have impact, the Plot’s and all subplots’ resolution must happen in as close to the same scene as possible, like so-

(<–Plot (<–subplot (<–subplot (<–subplot (middle action & further complication)))))

Where that last tightly-packed group of  ” ) ” are all the plot- and emotional arc- threads coming together to land an ending.  However, if you will notice, the vast percentage of the book is spent building something and only a very small percentage of the book is spent resolving or tying threads.

One of my now all-time favorite books is Howl’s Moving Castle by Diana Wynne Jones.  When I first read the book, however, I found the ending editorially satisfactory–but highly unsatisfying.   In fact, the only way I became satisfied with the ending is by rereading the book several times to picture what Howl’s side of the story really is and see all the other threads briefly hinted at but missed in the very beginning. It took becoming ill years later, downloading the audiobook, and listening to it multiple times in order for that to happen.

Yet still even now, whenever I reach the ending, I’m upset there isn’t more.  I don’t think that’s just Complaining Fan syndrome.  It’s happened enough times where, for lack of a better way to put it, an author sticks her ending true gymnastics-style with no misstep, following the formula that “everything needs to be resolved in as few scenes as possible for the Highest Dramatic Effect”. Yet what it really feels like as a reader is that we got to spend so much time with the characters before and now we’re rushing to leave them.

How is that satisfying?

A Satisfying Ending.

I recently read Midnight in Austenland by Shannon Hale.  I was surprised to discover that her ending looked more like this:

(Character plot (family plot (romance subplot (mystery subplot (middle) mystery’s false ending) mystery end) family false-end) family&romance end) character end)

There were two red herring endings in her book, meaning the resolution was not all solved in one scene or one chapter the way Howl’s Moving Castle and many other books try to do.  Granted, many people who expect everything to be nice and neat might be driven crazy that they didn’t get a tidy package with a string tied into a bow.

Yet her ending meant we could spend more time with the characters. The resolution actually felt resolved instead of rushed-through and hastily tied-together.  By the time I got to the last page, I was happy. Or rather, I was satisfied, sated.  I made a complete journey with the characters instead of  a hasty goodbye once we see the destination on the horizon.

Granted, in short stories and novellas, leaving the reader once the reader knows what the ending should be– is okay. But for novels?  Is that fair to the reader?  Are writers and editors out of touch on what a satisfactory vs. satisfying ending truly is?  Are we too reliant on formulas that produce high drama in exchange for high satisfaction? Or am I alone in this? Am I the only one who wishes authors would dispense with formula and let us spend as much time with characters at the ending as at the beginning?

What are your thoughts? Agree? Disagree?


The greatest sin for a writer.

You know what? The greatest sin for a writer from a reader’s perspective isn’t grammar mistakes, weak wording, plot holes, implausibility, flat characters–or anything else.

It’s simply not finishing.

Think about it! You would never start a trilogy if you knew the author wouldn’t finish it. You would never start a book if you knew the last half never got written.

So, here’s to one of the most influential books I read over and over as a child:

The Little Engine that could! I think I can, I think I can, I think I can, I think I can…finish.